This is both pages of my double page spread. As you can see i have maintained some continuality because i have used the same colours. On my second page i put a much larger image,and also added a blur to it, as it maintains that retro vibe.  I have quoted my artist and made it big and bold because this a typical media convention that is used in all types of magazines whether it be music or media etc.  The photograph of my artist on the second page highlights the arrogance of my artist as he is wearing sun glasses, its as if he doesn't want you to see what he is like beneath the glasses but at the same time. I have purposefully made my artist take this pose because In most music magazine the R&B artists typically look arrogant, and in your face. 

There are some improvements I could make like checking my spelling as if i don't I could look vital marks. And also little things like adding page numbers. 

And here is my final draft of my contents page. I have made numerous changes in order for it to look better, and to add detail. Firstly I have changed the layout, for example there is a black boarder in the middle of the page. This helps seperate the information on the page. Secondly on the second half of the page I added 1 more image, but crucially I have made all 3 of the images smaller, which givers the illusion that there is more content than there actually is. On the left hand side of the page  I have added some features that will be in the magazine, I've done this becuase it very conventional as almost all the magazines I have read like "clash" included it. Below features I have a competition for the readers of my magazine for a ipod. I have done this because an ipod would be something my ideal reader would love to have.

Another thing i've done is moved the quotation from my double page spread to the main pictue  which in black and white, because it looked better. Lastly I put the title of my magazine "flow" at the top, so that it connects my front page with my contents.